Another trope filled novel, that at least felt enjoyable. The author would benefit greatly from slowing down their update schedule, and having a few people to help them out. Maybe start a discord, add a few fans, bounce some ideas around, and once a chapter is written, the discord could fix the grammar mistakes. It also feels like the author is just putting their thoughts to papper, but they could benefit greatly from slowing down, and releasing one chapter every 2 days. TLDR; a non-serious enjoyable read, that could use an editor.
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