I can't say I like it. The story is a self insert from what I got from it, most the chapters I read (I've read up to chapter 6) are just him insulting police or a hero. We don't actually see any development of his powers. IDK why he has a system as normally they are used to track progress but as we don't see any of the progress he probably cpuld just take it out the story so that he doesn't have the double wish at the start. Other issues.No world building. No character development (that isn't instant).Inaccurate characters (they said they were on earth 22). Character manipulates his dads mind.Gets innocents killed by chapter 4 intentionally.Can't think of anything I like about it.
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