Review Detail of Lana12_Lana12 in What! I'm reincarnated as kyogre!

Can’t say much about this because it only has 2 chapters but I enjoy the concept of it all. I like the fanfics were the protagonist is actually a Pokémon and not just a generic trainer. What I can say is that there are so many just writing issues it is atrocious. Like I wouldn’t even call some of it misspelling… it’s just wrong in multiple ways that honestly I could somewhat translate it into something that was somewhat understandable… but I bet must people wouldn’t even bother that much to translate something from what should be English into actual English. The story is fine I guess and the idea is great but like… words that should be plural aren’t, sentences have words missing or have words in the wrong places, grammar issues, some sentences don’t make any sense, and just the past, present, and future tenses get mixed up. 3 stars rating is a generous honestly and it was mainly because of the idea otherwise it would had been like a 1 because this is like middle school level of writing.