Review Detail of Dem_11 in Dragon ball : Echoes of the Void

This is a spoiler-free review, as there is no point in me spoiling a story. It is worth mentioning that I have noticed some readers giving negative reviews based on their personal preferences not being fulfilled, such as wanting a harem or a cold-blooded protagonist who wins every fight. However, I believe in providing an honest review based on the story as it is. It is important to appreciate the author's creative choices and the unique direction they have taken with their narrative. Anyways here is the review: The quality of grammar in this fanfiction is commendable. Throughout the story, I have noticed very few grammar issues, and even where they exist, they are minor and do not hinder the overall reading experience. In fact, the grammar is superior to that of 90% of the fanfictions I have come across. The author's attention to detail and commitment to maintaining grammatical accuracy is truly praiseworthy. Regarding updates, the story has been consistently updated in its earlier stages, which is highly appreciated. However, due to the longer chapters, averaging around 3000 words, I would personally be satisfied even with two chapters per week. The author's dedication to providing regular updates, considering the length of each chapter, deserves recognition. In terms of story development, it is still too early to make a definitive judgment. However, in the earlier chapters, the author has effectively laid the groundwork for future story points and character development. This foreshadowing adds an intriguing layer of anticipation for what lies ahead, and I look forward to seeing how these hints unfold in the narrative. Character design is well executed, although not without room for improvement. The main character, Renji, is relatable and far from being a generic, dark and edgy character. He possesses a sense of humour while maintaining clear goals and a distinct personality. This nuanced portrayal adds depth to his character, making him engaging and likable. Regarding the world background, as this is set in the Dragon Ball universe, the author has hinted at a more expanded storyline beyond what we were shown in the original series. This expansion of the Dragon Ball world presents an exciting opportunity to explore new dimensions within the established universe. In conclusion, this fanfiction shows great promise. With its strong grammar, regular updates (considering the chapter length), hints at future story points, well-developed characters, and an expanded world background, it is a fanfiction that holds the potential for an immersive and captivating reading experience. I would like to commend the author and wish them good luck with their story. I look forward to reading their future works and leaving another review. Honest feedback and encouragement can go a long way in supporting an author's growth and creativity.