Review Detail of SK33ZER9 in Moonlit Shadows
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It’s beautifully written, the word choice and figurative langue truly elevate this novel. The story is told in summary instead of being there in the moment which I find a worse choice but to each their own The character don’t feel alive or dynamic at all and speak like NPCs in a video game and since the story is summarized character interaction is pretty poor and rare to find. Overall is beautifully written but the story and plot could use a lot of work.
Moonlit Shadows
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@SK33ZER9 Thank you for your review. I appreciate your kind words on the writing style and figurative language. While I understand your perspective on the summary storytelling approach, I aimed for reflection. I apologize if the characters felt static or lacked depth, and I'll work on improving them. Your feedback about limited character interaction is noted, and I'll make efforts to enhance it in future revisions. Your insights are invaluable as I continue to refine my writing. I hope my future work will address your concerns and resonate with you. Thank you for your support and understanding.