Review Detail of DaoistKushMountain in I messed up my book.

Shameless review from the Author. It's not going to be the best story out there, I'm an amateur writer and still improving. I can take your critics, give them to me. The main character got trapped inside a videogame when he was 14, so its safe to say he didn't develop as well as some of the readers. He's also an unreliable narator and loves to hear the sound of his own voice. The world still has a lot left to show, I hope you guys join me in the unraveling of this story.