Review Detail of demon_jester in Chrono-commando

actually what necks you is the tags you used and that there is no indication which fandom its for. I havent read yet, its on the to do list when I run out of fics again, but the only chrono commando that comes to mind are the ones from Red Alert so I am presuming this is a Red Alert fanfic. if its not a fanfic, I recommend moving this to the novel section. I recommend putting the fandom in the name like this example for potter fics: HP: or Harry Potter: etc so people can find it based on the fanfic. otherwise, people are likely to presume its from a fandom they dont like. I only found this fanfic just now because it showed on recently updated in the fanfic section. if you dont update frequently, youre likely to miss a lot of readers too. simply put, frequency and propper SEO and clear labeling are whats needed to get viewers. so just write for fun, lable it right, and they will come. make sure the formatting is good too, lots of people drop a fic first chapter if its badly formatted