Review Detail of Sagvey_Ay in Lord Raven's Court
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character development has been rushed a little, but you can fix it in the future, except that the universe and fiction are beautiful (it would be very nice if MC starts to degenerate as he gains power and wealth more soldiers more gold more women and a tyrant who rules the world like a puppeteer in the dark, though perfect finish
Lord Raven's Court
SlothfulChronicler
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Thanks for the review. About the character development... there is actually none, or none too drastic at least, so far. The real "character development" will happen at the latter parts of the novel. You might have confused the MC's two sides of being both nervous (to make the suspense for readers) and sly whenever he's faced with problems. Although, if you're talking about other characters, then I really indeed have to improve my character development. Anyway, thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!
Sagvey_Ay:and a happy ending
thank you very much for giving me the opportunity to read this beautiful story (I wish you success, my friend)
SlothfulChronicler:Thanks for the review. About the character development... there is actually none, or none too drastic at least, so far. The real "character development" will happen at the latter parts of the novel. You might have confused the MC's two sides of being both nervous (to make the suspense for readers) and sly whenever he's faced with problems. Although, if you're talking about other characters, then I really indeed have to improve my character development. Anyway, thanks for the review. I really appreciate it!