Review Detail of XAZVAPB0OTH in Marvel: Immunity
Detalhe da revisão
O protagonista teve suas memorias reveladas, pelo toque da vampira. O autos cometeu Um dos piores erros que um autor de fanfic de reencarnação ou transmigracão pode cometer, revelou as memórias de sua vida passada(se o capítulo for refeito eu vou excluir a baixa avaliação)
Marvel: Immunity
Hidden_Throne
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By vampire I assume that you meant Rogue. What she saw wasn't all of his memories, but 'bits and pieces' exactly like it was written. It would have been explained further that she didn't see anything that would reveal him reading Marvel as a comic/movie or anything that would point to it. This event will be an integral part of their relationship as the story goes on, that is why only parts of her, seen in the memories are highlighted. It is of your opinion that it's a mistake but it was a deliberate act on my part and I will not be changing it. Even after seeing and thinking of it because of your review. Thank you for taking the time to read.
Hidden_Throne:By vampire I assume that you meant Rogue. What she saw wasn't all of his memories, but 'bits and pieces' exactly like it was written. It would have been explained further that she didn't see anything that would reveal him reading Marvel as a comic/movie or anything that would point to it. This event will be an integral part of their relationship as the story goes on, that is why only parts of her, seen in the memories are highlighted. It is of your opinion that it's a mistake but it was a deliberate act on my part and I will not be changing it. Even after seeing and thinking of it because of your review. Thank you for taking the time to read.