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Review Detail of proganerx_Dave in (Undergoing Rewrite) Quirk Boundless Evolution

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As of this review, there are only 8 chaps the story is good although short shows potential although needs a little more information about the world at large more slice of life can work wonders for the pacing and add more chaptures to the story if there is a rewrite for this story count me in.

(Undergoing Rewrite) Quirk Boundless Evolution

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fair enough I always focused on action like it was the only thing the story needed I'll try and work with some slice of life aspect thanks for the advice