First thing, the story is great and you can tell that the author has knowledge of the legal system. But the details are missing and it makes one feel that there is no proper sense of where or what is happening. Another thing I do not understand is at the start it is mentioned that the ML has transmigrated to a parallel world. But nothing is different and ML is quite comfortable here too. Then what is the reason to mention the parallel world part? The story would be fine even if it took place in earth.
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Liked it!
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