the writing is so confusing..and I mean it seems like a good story but the writing takes me out of it to badly
Strike4_Blood
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I'm sorry to hear that but this is the first story I am trying to write. I strive to improve my writing so I can give my readers a better experience in the future. Thank you for the review and I hope you can still support me.
no worries mate, I think you got a good story here and I hope you improve as the story goes on.