Review Detail of Crom_Darkstar in Shadow Monarch: Multiverse Ascendance

well where to start ok let's start with writing quality at first it was a little bit better than MTL still readable but recently the writing quality improved alot.next mc.....ok he was a retard who sometimes thinks with his lower half but his character improved and became less irritating i almost dropped the FF because of him ...update stability is good .overall tho the beginning wasn't the best it improves later and i expect the mc to keep improving and become more mature . i wish good luck to the author and hope for him to keep improving as well as to try to benefit from useful criticism to improve . It's rare for me to write a review i hope it helps.