The main problem is the mc doesn't do anything relevant and his personality is very uncharismatic and stupidly arrogant. The little that was changed from the original plot is very irrelevant and strange
Hm, I understand. I acknowledge this as a fair enough criticism. It's a shame that you didn't like my work but, it is what it is. In any case, thank you for giving this fic a chance... I'll try my best to fix whatever I can. I hope you have a great day...