Review Detail of Vortex_Luminos2v in The Tales of The Magic Lover

Overall, quite bad, I mean really bad. First of all the grammar just makes it unbearable to read at all, the sentences and how they are structured is horrendous. This just screams new and that english probably isn't your main language because WOW. If you want to write a story atleast create a proper structure and have an understanding of grammar first. I now this just new, but I just can't force myself to read through this at all.