the story is good ....but why story line so messed up....at first in present scenario .....and suddenly after that the chapter name is 1855 ....the past scenario.....i think if there is a continuation of storytelling in proper arrangements ...like past to present ....it might be more helpful to read it..... because if not....it became very awkward ....to maintain the flow
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