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Review Detail of _VIIX_ in Marvel: I Can Create Symbiotes!

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This has left me so confused and so many of my braincells died in the process that I can't even comprehend what happened. Writing Quality: 3/5 It's barely better than a super poorly translated MTL. The whole thing feels so Chinese that I can't even get past a single line. I honestly am being overly generous with 3/5. Story development: 3/5 Now here, maybe I'm being harsh. Because the story development is not to my liking tbh and people might accuse me of being biased. But tbh I could care less. I simply can't find any logical flow in the development. Things just happen and everything is solved by symbiotes even before it started. Decisions make no sense when some characters are being evil for the sake of being evil when there really isn't a need to in the first place. But it's the author's choice. so, I won't complain much. Character design: 2.5/5 I honestly should give a 2 here. Every chapter I'm like why TF is the MC doing that. It's not like there's some super ultra hidden scheme I'm missing out on. No, in the end symbiotes will solve everything. And every one will be saying 'yes' to MC. So, all the hassle seems time waste to me. Updating is quite regular I guess. so 5/5. World background is 50/50. Wouldn't recommend to any native english speakers or if their English is good. Because honestly it is painful. Would encourage the author to work on his/her English because tbh the story isn't that bad. Main problem is, many details are getting glossed over because of this machine translation like writing style and we're only left with the barebones. This story feels like a skeleton with good structure but no body or soul.

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