Review Detail of Stormzz in Marigold, A New World

The story is progressing along at a solid, consistent speed. Descriptions of things are overall good, such as character designs. The tense sometimes jumps back and forth between past and present a little, although for the most part it is in the present (something I'm personally not a fan of). Overall, the characters are fairly well fleshed out for the chapters released, and there ae plenty of questions being posed.