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DaoistM0uhgH
DaoistM0uhgHLv151yr
2023-07-23 05:34

This story is well written with a nice flow of information. Looking forward to the sequel. 🤗

The Exiled Lady's Rumoured Tyrant.

AI380
4.9
114 Chs

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Lee_Hong_Law
Lee_Hong_LawLv1

The writer is my daughter, I will always support her work no matter what. She is a very passionate writer who spent all her time writing, so please support her.

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AI380
AI380Autor

Hello, I am the writer of this book, since I am not fond of review-swapping with other writers, so, this review section will look a bit empty before I got any actual reviews, and I believe for the next few months the rating will remain as 0.00 as I need at least ten reviews to have a rating, which might need a relatively long period if without review swapping. So, I will be grateful for any useful reviews with kind/neutral intentions.

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Floxy_Belle
Floxy_BelleLv4

I've only read five chapters but I'm really starting to love it. The characters are too notch👌The plot is quite excellent too. Keep it up 👍I'm expecting more ❤

1yr
JALLEN
JALLENLv14

This is a great story, each chapter has been a delightful surprise, and the interactions between the female and male leads are great! The writing quality is good and there don't seem to be many grammar errors. The pacing of the story is great and sometimes I don't feel the time pass as I was reading it. By the time I stopped reading, I was already at chapter 12. The characters are well-designed and feel real which is not the case in all the stories I have read. Overall, the story is well written and it shows that the author has taken a lot of time writing this. It deserves more exposure!

1yr
hansora
hansoraLv14

I only read until Chapter 5, here's what I think of the book 🌞 Writing - The author's writing skill is better than I expected. The descriptions are lovely and carefully crafted by her. The sentence structures are decent too, just many paragraphs are too long. Try to balance between the 'show' and 'tell' because 'telling' takes over the story so far. And minor grammar mistakes including the using of present tense instead of past tense. This is apparent in the synopsis too. Plot - It's too early to decide. The King should be the ML. I like how respectful he is so far. The FL seems to have a good head on her shoulders. She doesn't blindly continue to pay loyalty to the empire that has betrayed her. Her resolve and trauma might be the driving force if she decides to avenge herself and her family Just a note, I know the author doesn't want pointless reviews from authors who are swapping them but, it's better to have at least 10 just to push your book to the rankings. But, it's still up to you 🌞 All in all, the author has what it takes to excel in writing a book. Continue learning and all the best!

1yr
SilverWear21
SilverWear21Lv15

So far, nice quiet story. Writing style is good. As with many translations there are some missing words but those can easily be inferred. Overall, a good book to read on a cold, rainy day cuddled up under a blanket on a couch when you want to de-stress. Sweet

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Pjr
PjrLv15

This was a very nice story. Pacing of the story was a nice change from many of the books that seem to drag on. Glad that the author explained in the review section regarding the time period and mix of cultures…that this is more of a fantasy world not necessarily a historical world. By doing so, it is easier to be more accepting of various events/scenarios that at times can feel out of place. I loved all the characters and the author has done an excellent job in character development. There is room for improvement on the grammatical use of some words and there are a few unnecessary repetitive descriptions at times. Overall, this is a hidden gem of a book. I do hope the sequel follows soon but even if there is not one, the author has done a wonderful job on the ending…leaving the reader with hope.

1yr
honduareca
honduarecaLv15

I am looking forward to every new chapter being released. I really like this book and recommend it!

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Ash20
Ash20Lv4

Wow, just wow! this is amazing! I just started reading it, but I'm hooked. keep up your amazing work author!👍

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