Review Detail of hiatusy in being a side character of novel

so I continued reading on, after giving my last review (rates at 2 & 1/2 stars), and decided to renew my said review. although the writing quality is still poor (ik you're trying Mr Translator/Author and thankyou for that), it has at least improved somewhat. If you can get past said writing quality, then it's worth the read /try, since the story is quite interesting. The novel is good, just held back by the writing quality and update stability. Ps; Author/Translator-nim. I recommend trying to find someone fluent in English to edit your work before posting. you might be able to find an editor for free amongst your followers, who's willing to help, if not and have available funds, you can try finding an editor through fiver or something similar. Grammarly or an AI editing software may be of help but idk how much. i hope those recommendations may be of help to you ☺️