Well..., please remember that English is not my first language sorry if I have made a gramatical mistake. From what others told me, my grammar is pretty decent and is readable. The truth is that I liked this idea pretty much. I always liked Neville's character, he was in a way quite authentic and I think many can identify a bit with some aspects of his life and personality. And well, giving a good development to his character to improve even more than what we saw in the movies or books seemed interesting to me, and doing it in a more entertaining and uncommon way also enthused me. I hope you enjoy the story.
Shadow7Blue
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GOSTARSparsh_Kumar_1064:It has a pretty good start, and the idea is very intriguing. I hope that you continue writing it.