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Life changing Opportunity (John Lewis’ Revenge)
EddyKing
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Thank you for taking the time to read my work. And please don’t worry, i find your suggestion reasonable and applicable and i will surely implement it. Once again thank you for the feedback. 🙏🙏🙏🙏
Raziel_456:I've read it till the latest chapter and I can say it's going great so far, I just have a suggestion if you are going to keep it realistic. Could you please show gradual development of John's character, for example his behavior, he was pour and in some situations he couldn't express himself. He shouldn't just behave like he was born rich now that he found that his family is rich. THIS IS GUST A SUGGESTION YOU DON'T HAVE TO IMPLEMENT IT. IT'S YOUR NOVEL NOT MINE.
I've read it till the latest chapter and I can say it's going great so far, I just have a suggestion if you are going to keep it realistic. Could you please show gradual development of John's character, for example his behavior, he was pour and in some situations he couldn't express himself. He shouldn't just behave like he was born rich now that he found that his family is rich. THIS IS GUST A SUGGESTION YOU DON'T HAVE TO IMPLEMENT IT. IT'S YOUR NOVEL NOT MINE.
EddyKing:Thank you for taking the time to read my work. And please don’t worry, i find your suggestion reasonable and applicable and i will surely implement it. Once again thank you for the feedback. 🙏🙏🙏🙏