Review Detail of shv_luffy98 in Immortality: My Spell Upgrades Infinitely

Hard to read.. very plain and boring.. it's all over the place.. n that too within 35 chapters.. God knows how it's going to be further ahead.. MC kinda stupid with no much personality.. system felt decent and not too op at first.. but within a few chapters MC already crossed highest proficiency for several skills n it's still upgrading ,* spoiler * an example for the above.. once someone doesn't return back from another village/town/city at the time she mentioned.. so MC goes to find her all by himself.. he's at level 2/3 qi refinement n she's at level 9.. the general of town guard is her friend.. instead of informing her and going together he simply goes off alone to rescue her.. she's in a cave injured.. she thinks she's gonna die.. so she hands over her storage bag to her pet to give it to MC as she doesn't want to owe anything.. but she actually doesn't owe anything to the MC.. instead she has helped him a lot n he basically did absolutely nothing to help her or benefit her.. MC reaches on time.. swings his flying sword n kills all the leaders n stuff.. many people escape.. he finds the cave n enters.. escaped people come back.. he swings his flying sword a few times n kills them all.. when he goes back into the cave.. all of a sudden he's covered in blood n is injured.....