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_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv41yr_VOIDLESS_

This fanfic is weird but unique in its own right. Explaining the past though dreams is a genius idea but the story lacks finer details

Homo magi - New God

BlackMoon2

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BlackMoon2
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what details sorry, I want to know truly

_VOIDLESS_
_VOIDLESS_Lv4_VOIDLESS_

Well for example you kinda just info dump us with this thing I was confused at first so I had to read it from the first chapter and then that's how I understood what you were going for. My best bet will be for you to use year and dates so this way you can keep track of what's happening and for as readers to understand what's going on

BlackMoon2:what details sorry, I want to know truly