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2023-01-07 08:12

What else can you say, it’s another Einlion story. This would usually mean an unbearably frustrating MC that seems to appear in most of Ein’s stories. To my surprise, at least as of chapter 39, the protagonist hasn’t made me want to gouge my eyes out unlike the other MC’s Ein has created. The MC who has now been reincarnated? into the world of MHA as Izuku is someone who carries himself with confidence, is obviously more mature; leading to some tasteful flirting with the girls inhabiting the MHA world, and isn’t described as being on the verge of breaking down because of his own overthinking. Doesn’t mean a part of me doesn’t think the latter is inevitable since Einlion loves that for their MC’s. I’d absolutely love to be proven wrong though. As of chapter 38, it seems like this is heading towards a harem. This is good in my opinion, since the girls that have been introduced so far have been given very pleasant personalities and it would be a shame for them to have less “screen time” just to keep it realistic. On that note, there’s something that happened early on in the story between Izuku and Inko that I wish Einlion had at least attempted to follow through with. I wish to hold even a minuscule amount of hope that Einlion won’t take the easy way out and just pawn Inko off to All Might, but I’ve sadly read EPIC, and Mushoku Impact so the hope for a more interesting storyline between the two is all but guaranteed to be dead. (Please, just give me something new, I’ve been disappointed too many times at this point). TLDR: This is the only one of Einlion’s stories that I have been looking forward to enough to check for updates multiple times a day. After reading chapter 39 I lost a lot of that enthusiasm, so I’m just kind of sad right now.

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It's not that bad I have read until the first end it pretty interesting story. If you don't like a part stop for a few days and read some other work. When you cool down you will realize it wasn't the worst.

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