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Review Detail of Porter2013 in Devil Slave (Satan system)

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Porter2013
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this is a great book. My biggest complaint is that you leave us with a cliffhanger with the main person. I get that you are world building, and it's great, but come on, we're invested in the MC, then don't read about him is 4 or 5 chapters. it's like, why do I still read it. so please don't just jump from idea to idea and leave on cliffhanger. I personally am getting fed up with it. I know suspense and all, but I don't care so much about a person that you are going to ki*l off in a few chapters. world building is great but to much just ruins the book. it's like watching anime you like the show then it gives you filler episode after filler episode. so please stay with the MC and don't leave us hanging. I appreciate all you do in writing this book and if I'm going off and you think I'm wrong just keep doing what your doing.

Devil Slave (Satan system)

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Dere_Isaac
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okay...okay. 😆 back to the mc story it is then