Review Detail of SaraSaavedra in His revenge on me

Hello! Congratulations on your first novel! The theme of the novel seems interesting to me and invites the reader to continue wanting to know what will continue to happen in the following chapters. Honestly, it is a novel with a lot of potential. You're doing it right! I would only advise you two issues: I think you should improve the structure of the synopsis (a lot of white space) and I think it is not necessary to use so many "hahaha" in the dialogues.