Initial Evaluation: Great Potential. (Ch.6)
Lessen the info dump a bit (I know it helps you add words to it but too much of it will lessen readers enthusiasm).
Thank you for the tip. I know that too much info gets boring but I need to input it as I’m new to writing.
So if I write somthing and it doesn’t make sense I will explain it in either an A/N or in the story.