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I really appreciate the writing quality and update stability of the story, but the story become very disturbing for me at chapter 120 and above. The author want to paint the main character as a monster with high intelligence who can control something behind the scene with many preparations, but for me it get worse at this chapter when he need to kill and torture everyone. Take a break man.. Have some sleep.. You are already out of idea for the story, don't overstep that boundary that will damage it further. Continue later when your mind become more clearer.
I Will Kill The Author
Night_Crawler619
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Skull_Head:Well, I dropped after reading that part. Reason being him killing the girl even after giving his word to the vampire 'king'. After all that talk about his only redeeming quality being him always keeping his words...
XD thank you for the advice bro but it's been hinted since the start that MC would do anything to win. And no, it's not a decision that I made out of the blue and implemented it, it's a well thought out, pre-planned plot that sheds some light on Lucas' true character. Deep down, he would do anything to win. And there's a VERY good reason for that.
Night_Crawler619:XD thank you for the advice bro but it's been hinted since the start that MC would do anything to win. And no, it's not a decision that I made out of the blue and implemented it, it's a well thought out, pre-planned plot that sheds some light on Lucas' true character. Deep down, he would do anything to win. And there's a VERY good reason for that.
Night_Crawler619:XD thank you for the advice bro but it's been hinted since the start that MC would do anything to win. And no, it's not a decision that I made out of the blue and implemented it, it's a well thought out, pre-planned plot that sheds some light on Lucas' true character. Deep down, he would do anything to win. And there's a VERY good reason for that.
Well, I dropped after reading that part. Reason being him killing the girl even after giving his word to the vampire 'king'. After all that talk about his only redeeming quality being him always keeping his words...
Night_Crawler619:XD thank you for the advice bro but it's been hinted since the start that MC would do anything to win. And no, it's not a decision that I made out of the blue and implemented it, it's a well thought out, pre-planned plot that sheds some light on Lucas' true character. Deep down, he would do anything to win. And there's a VERY good reason for that.
He didn't kill her, did he tho? He left her to die. The mana beasts killed her. He specifically said he won't kill her and nothing about not leaving her to die. But yeah, I get why that part might turn some people off. It's not everyone's cup of tea.
Skull_Head:Well, I dropped after reading that part. Reason being him killing the girl even after giving his word to the vampire 'king'. After all that talk about his only redeeming quality being him always keeping his words...
Technically, he didn't. He indirectly killed her. If you still don't agree, let's say he did keep his word. But why though? He just used the loophole in his promise by emphasizing on the word ''I", but why? Just to preserve his so called only redeeming quality? If so, he should have just killed her. I mean, it is better death than slowly being eaten alive by mana beast, isn't it? and she couldn't even move!
SleepingBeauty_:he did keep his word
"I will not kill you. "'I' will not kill you." "I will not 'kill' you." I think there was a word for this, changing sentence's meaning by emphasizing on different words in that sentence. I cannot seem to remember that word though... but that's not the point! The point is why didn't he directly kill her? I talked about this in my other comment but why did he give Mary such a painful death? can't move, can't speak, calf bleeding, hearing beast's panting closer and closer, unwilling to die but still dying in a horrible way. Maybe you are thinking I am overreacting, which I am because I once experienced sleep paralysis similar to that... honestly, it was terrifying. So, please forgive my blabbering. It's as you said, that 'chapter' wasn't my cup of tea but before that I really enjoyed your book. (*_*)b PS: What the f is wrong with vertical spacing. I don't know if it is glitch or just my keyboard...
Night_Crawler619:He didn't kill her, did he tho? He left her to die. The mana beasts killed her. He specifically said he won't kill her and nothing about not leaving her to die. But yeah, I get why that part might turn some people off. It's not everyone's cup of tea.
Skull_Head:"I will not kill you. "'I' will not kill you." "I will not 'kill' you." I think there was a word for this, changing sentence's meaning by emphasizing on different words in that sentence. I cannot seem to remember that word though... but that's not the point! The point is why didn't he directly kill her? I talked about this in my other comment but why did he give Mary such a painful death? can't move, can't speak, calf bleeding, hearing beast's panting closer and closer, unwilling to die but still dying in a horrible way. Maybe you are thinking I am overreacting, which I am because I once experienced sleep paralysis similar to that... honestly, it was terrifying. So, please forgive my blabbering. It's as you said, that 'chapter' wasn't my cup of tea but before that I really enjoyed your book. (*_*)b PS: What the f is wrong with vertical spacing. I don't know if it is glitch or just my keyboard...
Night_Crawler619:XD thank you for the advice bro but it's been hinted since the start that MC would do anything to win. And no, it's not a decision that I made out of the blue and implemented it, it's a well thought out, pre-planned plot that sheds some light on Lucas' true character. Deep down, he would do anything to win. And there's a VERY good reason for that.
Don't worry author-san it makes sense. She was going to be strong in the future and he couldn't deal with her so he had to play with words. But in the end he kept his word
Night_Crawler619:He didn't kill her, did he tho? He left her to die. The mana beasts killed her. He specifically said he won't kill her and nothing about not leaving her to die. But yeah, I get why that part might turn some people off. It's not everyone's cup of tea.
Night_Crawler619:He didn't kill her, did he tho? He left her to die. The mana beasts killed her. He specifically said he won't kill her and nothing about not leaving her to die. But yeah, I get why that part might turn some people off. It's not everyone's cup of tea.