Review Detail of Shane_Town in Paradise Pokeball System

It is very good with a few caveats the mc is a little slow in the head at times. like let's say trying to escape an evil organization only to run to a lawless place with two more evil organizations when he could just open a portal to a different dimension or timeline (I'm still a little confused on this part.) also, lemons happen very quickly with his captures which I don't mind at all personally but I could see where many will feel like it's too fast. It's still in its infancy but I feel like around human women the mc is too submissive even after being in a coma for ten years. and having his mind crammed with information by an AI he acts similarly to a little boy with his mom or aunt figures being shy, blushing, and running away instead of taking a stand. and even at this first moment of defiance or self-respect he immediately throws it away and acts like a little pleaser. I really hope mc becomes more emotionally developed over the course of the story maybe a mature motherly woman can help straighten him and his eq defianceis out because that's really the only thing I dislike about this story so far is the mc's current disposition towards submissiveness. But all in all I really like this story and I hope we continue to get more and more chapters.