Currently up to chapter six so far it’s not too bad in fact I would say it’s doing pretty good for now. Writing quality is ok rarely will you find any misspelled words. Development is doing fine for now just as long as you don’t do any cliches with the dragon balls like fruit tree of might or pocket space I’ve seen enough of those. I think it would be interesting to involve some xenoverse plot considering how you are changing the timeline.
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