Review Detail of ForcedLabor in Harry Potter and the Lightning Lord

The idea is interesting but doesn't feel good to read. The arranged marriage felt a bit meh, but turning dumbledore into a bad guy is really dumb as some other people pointed out in the end he died and his Patronus is phoenix which is part of the white magic school, If Dumbledore was evil to being with then he'd probably be unable to use Patronus. TLDR: Was promising however very poorly executed, felt very very forced.