The storyline is great. The plot is fascinating. Very few errors in grammar. Though your usage of capitals is quite confusing. I dunno know though, maybe it's just me. I won't say it's an awesome read right now. But your book has awesome potential. Keep it up author. P.S: Your ideas that you put in your book are quite intriguing. Love the whole concept BTW. Maybe I'll steal them sometime. Haha.
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