Its good but the farther in you read the more random it is like i got to the point where he is a sudden vigilante no build up just boom also i understand that realism is loved here but i have no interest in a coward that choose to go into a job that kills people thats the difference between dreamers and actors one expects and the other acts.
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GOSTARWith the theme of the vigilantes, I did plan to develop several chapters, but the truth is that I was somewhat lazy at the time and almost immediately after publishing I regretted but it was already done, so I decided to follow it. And with the other theme of his low heroism, I just created the vigilante arc to build his character a little more. I've been editing the previous chapters, so I'll probably add what's missing to those chapters at the beginning of the arc. Thanks for reading!