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MarrecoJosias
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Man, I could tell your fanfic sucks. But, that would be a big lie, I saw an almost perfect development background, there were just a few errors related to character development. But that doesn't take away from the fact that this fanfic is awesome. Very good

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Could you tell me those development errors? to improve the story, thanks!