So, as I said in chapter one, you are not gonna be able to let me, let go of this one. I like the idea, I love the mc and the names the people around him. The writing is bit confusing for readers due to the excessive use of as and by but It's nothing you can't change. I like how the MC is from Philippines too, i never see lot of those so it's bit special for me. Keep up the good work, or I'll hound your ass for more chapters.
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