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Solid ten for punctuations! I really have problems with that aspect and I've rarely seen authors who have nailed that fact either. The writing quality is 4.5 for me and I know the book is just starting but most of the MC's characteristics were vague. We want a trait to use to label him specifically so we'll keep our eyes peeled while awaiting each new chapter. The planning of the world background is really cool, especially since he transmigrated to a place like earth. I think the world runner places or should I say planet names are well thought of. It takes a while to be able to come up with something that good. So the character design is what I can say needs more work