Overall the premise does seem interesting with a good take on the whole super power psychic genre so far. The main character is well characterized and unlike many other stories on this site does not immediately become overpowered(a huge turnoff to me). Criticism wise, I would have to say that sometimes parts of the Liam's monologues feel a bit too clunky which might not help with the overall immersion. Other than that, this is a very nice read if you are looking for the story in the super hero/superpower genre which is decently developed and not a simple instant power fantasy.
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