Review Detail of Killer_Lord in The way of the villain
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Yo this novel is good and all but the writing is confusing. Like the pov switching is weird and peoples thoughts look like regular paragraphs. I think you need to start reading your chapters and check them. Sometimes double check them to be sure. Or read other novels to help improve your writing.
The way of the villain
Choka
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You can't expect me to write something good on my first day of writing mate. New authors are doing way worse than this as I'm seeing. I did read hundreds of books and I'm trying to constantly improve as a writer, I went through the whole novel more than 30 times and I'm constantly editing everything I could, but everything starts so slow mate. Thanks for your review and I actually remembered to focus more on fixing first chapters cause of you, I appreciate it ☺️. Hope you keep reading till at some point you like what you reading.