Review Detail of KING_IN_YELLOW in The Marvel-Overwatch Journey (old copy rewrite up)

If you can’t read just because you think the paragraphs are too long, I think that’s a you problem and not the story lol. Here let me make this easy for you I was able to read the story fairly easily So I don’t understand where you’re getting at I thought the grammar was amazing Definitely better than 90% of fanfics out there 👍

the main problem is not the block of paragraph, if the said paragraph has a lot of info in them but nope a 1k block of paragraph is just an explanation of a simple background, the grammar is better than most webnovel author, but the author's ability to engage the reader are below avg, the story is really confusing if you skip some part, which a lot of readers did since it's blocky text and its hard to back read for information again because its a block of text, summary is that it's not about the author's amazing grammar it's about the format of his writing, and ability to draw readers attention, I've read the bible a book with blocky text, so yeah I read blocky text novel if the story is able to draw my attention. ps: i dont really believe in christian bible since it's full of inconsistency, like dafaq you mean new testament did jesus and the apostles come back and rewrite the story? like wth? and when i finish the bible it's like this old novel with op mc, mc (jesus) son of god, is immortal has healing powers got some sickkk reviving skill with kindness of an anime protag(goody two shoes protag), get betrayed by one of his best friend(Judas) erc. you get the idea.

It is currently full of inconsistencies because the inconsistencies were placed there over the millennia, obviously! There are countless passages and books modified, removed and added. There is no New and Old Testament. The Bible is just a collection of books. A complete, undivided collection. The correct names are The Old Covenant and The Renewal of the Covenant, it is not even a new covenant, but rather the old one being renewed. This separation into two is not Christian, it is Marcionism, a heretical theology. Now did Jesus and the apostles rewrite history? What? Jesus himself said that he did not come to abolish anything, but to fulfill the promises made. However, there are indeed problems with one of the apostles, and that is Paul, who despite being considered an apostle, he is not. And all of his letters, which are the majority of the new testament, are full of pure hypocritical madness. So it seems to me that you didn't actually read the Bible, or you read it and didn't understand it, or you read it and took Paul's words into consideration. Paul shouldn't even be there, he was added to the bible by Marcion (which divided the bible in two).