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Review Detail of black_dark in wicked soul

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The novel is new and wonderful, all you need is to slow down the pace of events a little and explain the power system better and in deeper details Regarding the depth of character, I respect your decision not to waste time In writing secondary characters, they will appear in only seven chapters at most. And good luck

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EvilGrandpa

Liked it!

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