My main issue with the story is the main character, he is just annoying and just treats his new life as if it was anime. I though that he would be atleast a little tolerable due to his personality from the prologue but when the real chapters are out, he is just annoying. Even with how I like the setting, its really hard to continue reading when the main character constantly rants on how he hr is the protagonist, cursing other protagonists and ranting about girls. If he was a villain, he is more like the annoying villain that isn't really taken seriously.
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GOSTARthank you for your opinion. i actually don't write him as a villain but hey i am a noob author, it turned out that way. thanks for liking my setting, i am really confident about world building, but you have cut me some slack when it comes to character development. I say it openly mc is a self insert character , a cowardly scum on the inside, whose thoughts don't actually match his actions. I didn't even begin the story, it will take a few more chapters to start the main story . Again thanks for your honest opinion , i really appreciate it. I wish you a Happy New year.
Jheydi327:Thanks for the warning... the way MC acts from synopsis already irritates me... so delusional and needs someone to slap him hard..