Review Detail of Franklin_Puckett in I am in a new world, playing an offline RPG game

I only just started the story and I am just on ch 6 but I don’t think I will be able to continue reading. I like the story or at least the idea for the story however I can’t get over how many times there are either mistakes or how often certain words get repeated in a paragraph. For example, the paragraph I read on ch 6 before I decided to post the used the word quickly in 5 or 6 different sentences one after the other. The author also uses the word well way too much. I understand that the authors first language isn’t English but I feel there should be more effort to either proofread or look up the words that they don’t understand before posting the story. So like I said, I like the story unfortunately the lack of language skills turns me off from continuing to read this story.