Review Detail of CruelReality in Naruto: Kogan no Yurei
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Not amazing, but certainly not bad. It didn’t really grip me, this is likely due to the writer being new and thus less able to engage the reader. However, the grammar was fine and the pacing thus far is pretty decent. I also enjoy the premise, and thank god for no system or wishes. Will be interesting to see if the author can keep up his writing and make this story into something special.
Naruto: Kogan no Yurei
DimensionalXDemon
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hey man thanks for the honest review. i honestly felt that too when i reviewed it... however I don't know what to do... i tried the first person perspective but i guess it didn't work, that's why i change it in chapter 11 or 12. im gonna edit the first few chaps later but not soon.... also I'm sick of reading novels with sytems .... by the way update is nor regular hehehe
I don’t think the first perspective is necessarily an issue. But third person could also be nice. Either works to be honest, go for what you want.
DimensionalXDemon:hey man thanks for the honest review. i honestly felt that too when i reviewed it... however I don't know what to do... i tried the first person perspective but i guess it didn't work, that's why i change it in chapter 11 or 12. im gonna edit the first few chaps later but not soon.... also I'm sick of reading novels with sytems .... by the way update is nor regular hehehe