Review Detail of DimensionalXDemon in Naruto: Kogan no Yurei

hello guys... I'll shamelessly give myself a 5 star... i just wanted to say that i use first person perspective here in this story for it to be immersive. however, i think that i will switch to third person perspective soon, i don't know but i will try it, it may be better, i think..... and i will try to lengthen each chapter because i fell that it is too lacking and feels rushed... so, yeah that's all.. ohh i still want to add that this is my first work and i am not that good in English. so please bear with it. thank you... don't forget to like😉😘