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I might have read a different (probably older) version of your work of the same title which was only 11 chapters. So let me redeem myself. I've read until the latest chapter and I would say the more you read, the more you get hooked into the story. It started from “okay” to “Dang, that's wild”. As for the grammatical errors which is the omission of both a few punctuations and capitalization of the first letter of some words, they do need improvement but isn't completely necessary as the story compensates for it. Job well done author-sama💛

365 DMTAD Moved 黑名单

lo_rezi

Liked it!

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lo_reziAutorlo_rezi

thank you ❤️