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well, gotta be honest here, the writing quality is good, the updates are consistent, but that's it. the Mc is an carbon copy of naruto and is still spouting about becoming hokage and is acting like a child instead of a grown man he is. he still has an obsession with people becoming friends with and he is spouting about becoming hokage, and this aren't even naruto world, I cannot recommend uou this fic, I gave 3.6 rating cause of it's writing quality and consistency, so don't waste your time reading this.
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Do you know how difficult it is to write a fanfiction with a mature character when the main protagonists of that fictional world are a bunch of kids? . . . . . . . . . . Well I don't! Writing them is so easy....in my mind of course, because I unfortunately, I can't execute the words properly, which means, I can't write novels😔. Everytime I try, I get hit by a writer's block halfway through the first chapter, it's frustrating!! So respect to these guys who can pop out 20+ chapters like it's nothing. And for the problems that you mentioned, I came across them more times than I can remember to the point where I just treat those characters like they're living their first lives but with a knowledge from another life. It becomes easier then. Though I wish he could be original and not be just another Naruto.
hmm, so what? the author has published his work here, and as a reader it is my job to point out the shortcomings of his work, if he doesn't want criticism, he shouldn't publish his work, because let's be honest, I am one of the more polite of the bunch, if you have read enough fics and novels, uou will see people using much more vulgar language. and while it may be hard to write mature character, it's not my problem, like when you publish your work here, be ready to face tons and tons of criticism, readers don't see that author cannot write or he is bad at writing mature character, no we see the work itself, if we don't like it, we say it. and please don't bring on the argument that you should write your own fic or something, it's stu*id and overused.
Unconscious_Truth1:Do you know how difficult it is to write a fanfiction with a mature character when the main protagonists of that fictional world are a bunch of kids? . . . . . . . . . . Well I don't! Writing them is so easy....in my mind of course, because I unfortunately, I can't execute the words properly, which means, I can't write novels😔. Everytime I try, I get hit by a writer's block halfway through the first chapter, it's frustrating!! So respect to these guys who can pop out 20+ chapters like it's nothing. And for the problems that you mentioned, I came across them more times than I can remember to the point where I just treat those characters like they're living their first lives but with a knowledge from another life. It becomes easier then. Though I wish he could be original and not be just another Naruto.
