plot is confusing, way too many words that no one uses, author cant seem to decide if a character will be male or female (changing he for she and viceversa all the time), peter feels almost robotic sometimes. its good for killing time but be prepared to try decipher some parts
Navuhodonosr
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GOSTARNavuhodonosr:I'm looking for someone to help me make the text more natural for native speakers, but so far without success... Thank you for your honest feedback.