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Review Detail of Vesemyr in Eldritch Creature's Guide

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Vesemyr
VesemyrLv131yrVesemyr

Review as of chapter 75 (dropped) The writing quality isn't that good, lots of grammatical error, author sometimes repeat things over and over, inconsistency in 1 chapter MC said he has never seen this girl true dragon form, several paragraph later he said he spar with her dragon form a few times, duh MC is ruthless or whatever just because author said it, idk it feels forced. So far he behaved like Japanese MC and author make him massacre, torture human or whatnot just to make him seems ruthless. So don't expect Fang Yuan or Leylin here. Story is average, do quest get reward inheritance power up yada yada The only redeeming quality of this book for me is the eldritch reference and world background, with tower as the center connecting to multiple world with their own civilization development and god, devil, demon or something else presiding over it

Eldritch Creature's Guide

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CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2CriticalReader

mc is a simp and a pushover... not even close to being evil

Trafford
TraffordAutorTrafford

thx for review... some of these things I have been trying to adress, though It would be better say that MC is apathic instead ov ruthless...

Vesemyr
VesemyrLv13Vesemyr

that's the reason I dropped fr

CriticalReader:mc is a simp and a pushover... not even close to being evil