Review Detail of as_ss in Wakanda Forever
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yes English may definitely your native language, but it is not your first, because the English in this story is terrible,
Wakanda Forever
Jaquaviontavious
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Have you seen your synopsis you should fix it because it makes people think the mistakes will be common.
Jaquaviontavious:Saying my english is terrible, but can’t put together a correct sentence. 🤷♂️🤷♂️🤷♂️
Thomas_scarfo:Have you seen your synopsis you should fix it because it makes people think the mistakes will be common.
Thomas_scarfo:Have you seen your synopsis you should fix it because it makes people think the mistakes will be common.
Reread your synopsis, “Random black dude reincarnated as his one of his favorite superheroes in the dc universe.” Fixed versions, version 1: “Random black dude reincarnated as his favorite superhero in the dc universe.” Version 2 “ Random black dude reincarnated as one of his favorite superheroes in the dc universe”
Jaquaviontavious:I dont see anything wrong.
While I can understand that the way English is spoken in the hood is something else, not using apostrophes in your sentences just seems lazy. Still, it's not something that can't be solved with a decent grammar checker or even a phone's autocorrect. Just run your work through a decent spell check and you'll be fine.
